One Million

Fiction by Velocity | 4/12/2008
The rain comes from the skies above,
the grey blobs, those are clouds.


The tiny drops of water that splash down
touching the surface of the ground.


forming puddles that deapen and deapen. I see a girl, of the age of 16
walking in the rain, her heart full of anger


her eyes drenched with darkness
her soul, so lost and hurt


almost to weak to stand in the rain

her tears flood her hands
she lifts her hands to heaven


one million crownds
one million people
one million hearts broken in two
Tears roll down their cheeks
into their hands
lift up your hands to the one who made you
One million voices
asking for help

one million hearts
no knowing what to do

one million tears
filling up the streets

one million rain drops
Helping them to know


...
God is in control
April 12th 08 - 9:35
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Velocity | Sat, 04/12/2008 - 2:48pm

"one million crownds" is suppost to be CrowDs

Maddie J-3 | Mon, 04/14/2008 - 9:00am

Hey Velocity!
You are really getting good!!!! Although I didn't understand the line:
"Her tears flooded her hands..."
Could you explain a little?
Very good never-the-less!
Maddie J-3

Velocity | Mon, 04/14/2008 - 11:13am

Thanks Maddie :) um I guess its kinda like she has soo many tears (hardships) so shes giving them to God. P.S.