Hidden Paths

A Poem By The Way // 11/7/2012

Hidden in the shadows
Of a forest
Beneath the undergrowth
Is a wild path
Whispers of the trees
Guide the way
Songs of the Birds
Just ahead, but never in sight
Shaped by your thoughts
Never still, but moving
Follow the path of your dreams



Well, not MY favourite of yours, but still good. I like the ending. Keep on writing! (did you notice that was a prompt to post more? Hehe...)

Maddi | Tue, 11/13/2012

Goodbye? Oh no, please. Can’t we just go back to page one and start all over again?” – Winnie The Pooh

Thanks for reminding me to

Thanks for reminding me to post more. I'm posting all my old poems till I get to my new ones but I keep forgetting. And thank you so much for reading my poems.

The Way | Wed, 11/14/2012

I love -

- the line "shaped by your thoughts" :) What a cool idea! (to think of birdsong that way)

Sarah Bethany | Fri, 04/05/2013

Thank you so much! I

Thank you so much! I struggled with that line so that means a lot to me.

The Way | Fri, 04/05/2013


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