Destiny's Call

A Poem By Wings of Eternity // 4/12/2011

This poem is dedicated to Kassady and HomeschoolGirl. I was not going to publish this on the web until I got it copyrighted as a part of my poetry collection, but I decided to make an exception with this poem. This is a thank you for always commenting on my work! This poem I wrote a while ago and it is based off of the movie Prince of Persia. It is about Dastan's and Tamina's love and destiny. I saw one of Kassady's comments that said about really liking the movie. Hopefully you both like this poem then! Thanks again!

 

The fates they bind

our destinies intertwined,

the time to act is nigh.

 

From the days of old,

our hands they hold,

the future and time gone by.

 

For the sake of all

we must heed the call,

and push past all our fears.

 

We must endure the pain,

the scorn and shame,

and dry away our tears.

 

Our death we must face

with strength and grace,

if that is where this will lead.

 

For those who are near,

and all we hold dear,

will give us the courage we need.

 

Only time will tell

if this will end well,

if we will live to see the night.

 

If help from above,

and faith in our love,

can see us through this fight.

 

For we can’t forget,

or just simply let,

our memories fade away.

 

For a love so sure,

so true and pure,

time will never decay.

 

Comments

Loved this!

Hey, Wings of Eternity! 

Great work, here! As always! LOL! Thanks so much for sharing AND for your dedication--very nice of you. I love these lines right here:

Only time will tell

if this will end well,

if we will live to see the night.

 

If help from above,

and faith in our love,

can see us through this fight.

Those stanzas stick out as being really powerful to me. All your work is fantastic! This is a perfect description of Dastan and Tamina's love for one another. I hated in the end how they had to start all over--with only him remebering--but, oh well, it looked certainly more promosing than it did the first time for them! LOL! Thanks again for sharing another great work! :))

 

-HomeschoolGirl :)

Madeline | Wed, 04/13/2011

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

Thanks :)

Thanks again HomeschoolGirl for your comment! You're more than welcome for the dedication :) Both you and Kassady deserve it for being such loyal readers! I really love the stazas you said you liked as well. This poem is high on my favorites list of my poems about love (I have quite a few). I am glad that you enjoyed it and the rest of my work :) I have to wait a little while for my posts to reset, but once they do, I'll see if I can find some more stuff to upload (or write some new stuff if I find the time). Thanks again and God Bless!

Wings of Eternity

Wings of Eternity | Thu, 04/14/2011

"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12

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