Lover's Lullaby

A Poem By Wings of Eternity // 6/11/2011

Note: I wasn't sure whether to try to post this or not due to possible misconceptions about the subject matter; however this is meant to be a poem based on a husband and wife's love for each other as they fall asleep together (something beautiful, God-pleasing, and without sin).

 

Darkness cannot encroach

on dreams so soft and sweet,

or wrap itself around two hearts

in synchronizing beat.

 

Fears banished in a soft caress,

words not need be spoken.

Hands intertwined together,

leaving peacefulness unbroken.

 

A ghosting of a loving breath

seeps into their skin.

The beauty of this moment lingers,

untouched by a sin.

 

Embracing souls float on free

in a gentle sigh.

Lulled to sleep by this song,

a lover’s lullaby.

 

 

 

Comments

Short but Sweet

Great job, Wings of Eternity! This was short, sweet, and to the point. It had a dreamy quality to it as well, so, I loved this one as well! :)

Madeline | Mon, 06/13/2011

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

aww! loved it!

This was really sweet! I loved it! I'm trying to think... what was my favorite line? I liked all of them! So sweet! Very good job! As always :D!

Write on!

Kassady | Mon, 06/13/2011

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Thanks HomeschoolGirl and Kassady!

Thanks again guys for your lovely replies :)   I really love this poem because of it's happiness and contentedness. It is a rather short poem for me, but it seemed to work for this one. I will try to get some more stuff up sometime (hopefully) soon. I also will try to read some more of your guys' work too now that I am not sick and out of college :)  I really enjoy both of your works!

God Bless,

Wings of Eternity

Wings of Eternity | Tue, 06/14/2011

"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12

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