The Promise of a Dream

A Poem By Wings of Eternity // 7/7/2011

In the depths of sky-blue eyes,

I’m entranced, I’m mesmerized.

My heart was captured in a beat

And that alone is quite a feat.

 

Your smile was so soft, sincere,

It banished every single fear.

And as I held your gaze in mine,

It seemed that God had stopped all time.

 

I could not move, nor could I breathe.

How could I bring myself to leave?

I knew though that I could not stay,

But it seemed my heart would not obey.

 

The pain had begun to take its toll,

When I found refuge in your soul,

As you proclaimed your love for me,

Yet I must wait for this to be.

 

You smiled more brightly, as did I,

when I realized it was not goodbye,

But instead the promise of future joy

with this blond-haired, blue-eyed boy.

 

For now I know that I must wait,

Until that promised day of fate,

When God will bring us both together,

Into a love that will last forever.

 

Comments

Love it :)

Love it :)

Erin | Wed, 07/13/2011

"You were not meant to fit into a shallow box built by someone else." -J. Raymond

Thanks Erin!

Erin,

Glad you loved it! Thanks for letting me know!

God Bless,

Wings of Eternity

Wings of Eternity | Thu, 07/14/2011

"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12

Sorry I didn't read until now but...

Great! :)

(((as always)))

Madeline | Thu, 07/28/2011

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

Thanks :)

Homeschoolgirl,

Glad you liked it! Don't worry about the late comment! I am just thrilled you got the chance and took the time to let me know you read and liked it! I will see what I can do about writing something else to post here because I know I haven't posted anything in a while. I apologize, but I have been extremely busy with work related stuff.

God Bless,

Wings of Eternity

Wings of Eternity | Fri, 07/29/2011

"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12

Amazing!!!

Truelly Amazing!!! I loved this, the rythme and the wording was incredable!!! Well done and a round of applause!!!

Write on!

Kassady | Wed, 08/17/2011

"Here's looking at you, Kid"
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Write On!

Thanks Kass!

Thanks Kassady for taking the time to comment :)  Sorry I haven't posted any new stuff lately, but I have been incredibly busy this summer. Look for some new stuff soon though because I will be going back to college soon and will probably be writing for stress relief haha! God Bless!

Wings of Eternity

Wings of Eternity | Thu, 08/18/2011

"Be an example to all believers in what you say, in the way you live, in your love, your faith, and your purity." 1 Timothy 4:12

Didn't realize I had already read this...

Didn't realize I had already read this--and read it again! Even better the second time. Your rhythm is fantastic. :) 

Well, anyways! (haha) I know how busy things can get, so post again whenever you can! 

~HomeschoolGirl ;D

Madeline | Mon, 08/29/2011

everything was better when/you would call and I'd be like/yeah babe, no way

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